Nice ;D
It's good to say it's the first sort of anime styled animation you've done. All I can say is try and keep the art consistent, when drawing lines etc. Well done ;D
Author Comments
After some time of submitting nothing.
i decided it would be a fun thing to make a new series.
and sinds i didnt work with Windtunnelarchives for quite some time now.
i just HAD to make something with him!
so we made this little thing. nothing more then a trailer!
more to come though!
Roles:
Terry: jochio
jake: Windtunnelarchives.
Toaster: windtunnelarchives.
Short Notice: i worked on this for around an afternoon.
the real Episodes will be ALOT better. and the humor will be greatly Increased!
I REALLY like the style, but could improve...
The comedy in this movie was really good, and so was the voice acting. Wind made an amazing job in doing voices. The animation was choppy, but seems like it had quite a lot of effort in it. I'd recommend you try to rely more on FBF and less on tweening, specially when lip syncing. Still, an enjoyable movie.
has great potential.
I look forward to seeing more of this series, so far it looks great. the graphics are good, and the humor was all right, what else is there to ask for in an animation? Docked 2 stars though because it was short.
Umm
Funny, but not near long as it should be.
Jochio responds:
the episodes will be tripled in length.
nice
Good humor, quite funny, ubt not too over the top, The toaster bit was pretty good. Drawings were clean and good, but the anime style is a bit over used. That being said you did a decent job with it anyway. Nice voicework to Windtunnelarchives as well.
Jochio responds:
Thanks for the positive review.
Windtunnelarchives did a good job with hes role as jake!
i made this animation in about an afternoon, so Episode one wil be alot bigger!
The humor was adjusted though. putting in a trailer with corny jokes just makes it a bad trailer. overal it went pretty good!
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3.38 / 5.00
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