lol

This Is A Fairly Decent Flash, But it lacks in a decent preloader, animation, and even the drawings. It still made me laugh, and I swear, if macs were like this, Apple would be getting sued by me lol.

Tips: Get A good PreLoader, Work A little harder on it (more time) and take time in the animation. 3 for the comedy. hope you find this review helpful

made me laugh

I don't think that the flash was as bad as people made out, a funny short.

A decent parody.

I got a few laughs out of this, mainly because of the manilla envelope joke. I also like the song that's used in the commercial, so you get a bonus point for including it. It's a good start, but some improvement is definately needed.

I can tell most of it was serious motion tweening, some animation technique and style is essential to obtain flash skill. A preloader would have been nice too, I was waiting for the flash to load for quite some time. The flash was missing those basic things, that's why it flew below the radar.

Like I said, style and technique make up a good flash. You already have a good sense of humor, and thaty will definately benefit you with your future flashes. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing new flashes from you.

Excellent

That made me lol.
It loaded quickly for me, but yeah, if you suck @ preloaders, get the NG one.

I thought thatw as very good, dont know what everyone else below me is on about saying it was rubbish :p

I will Agree...Get a Newgrounds Preloader.

And i didnt want to blam or anything because probably you were bored and after that drew something and posted it here to see the comments and the rate...

In compare of what i have seen in newgrounds you take a 2.See it like a lv up until 10.When you post something better you will get a level.Try harder.I wanted to rate 1 but nevermind.

Animation: 1
Storyline: 2
Music: 5 (in compare of what we saw)
Graphics 1

Do your best.

Oh and GET A PRELOADER