it's ok
not bad animation, the song was alright, but im sure you could do better :)
Good Luck finishing the rest, would like to see it fully done.
5/10 for the effort.
Author Comments
The work in progress for the opening of Warriors: United by Fire. C:;
K, basically, I'm a newb to newgrounds.
I probably suck at animating, too.
But this is still just a WIP.
Anyway, the series is inspired by the Warriors series of books by Erin Hunter.
|D; I'm a fan, I suppose.
Oh, and, sorry. XD; The animation loops.
The music is WARRIORS by Yuiichi Ikusawa, and is a Yu-gi-oh opening...the fifth, I think.
(I don't like Yu-gi-oh, just to let you know. |C)
The original concept for the series (c) Erin Hunter
Characters and art (c) Me and my deviantart friends.
You can check out more at my dA. C: I go by the same name, there.
Arkeokaze responds:
Thankyou very much~ C:;
So far you're the only one who understands that this is just a work in progress. |D;; And I thank you for it. And for not marking me too harshly. XD
;w;
DUUUUDE. It's awesome so far, even if the animation is jumpy. It'll be fixed in the end. I can't WAIT to work on this. <3
Arkeokaze responds:
XD; Thanks Eruuuuu~
nothing
.:ups:.
good music
.:downs:.
this is nothing
end text is way too fast
.:comments:.
this seems like it has potential, but the thing is, the wolves aren't even completely drawn, and when it end it loops, but before it does, there's text that is WAY too fast too even read. next time, finish it.
Arkeokaze responds:
I was honestly kicking myself for allowing it to loop at the end. |D I need to fix that in the future. But the text simply says the copyright, which I've re-written into the description.
Still, that's no excuse. XD;;
And yes, the cats aren't completely drawn. Hence it being a wip.
One Star
Its not that your artwork wasnt good or anything but there was almost no animation and nothing really happend. You should have made an intro and then the cartoon and then submitted it.
Arkeokaze responds:
Yes, I know there was no animation. XD; That's because this is just a work in progress, there will be much more animation by the end product.
Honestly, I haven't been using flash very long, which is why my animation is a little shabby. XD;
But still, I appreciate your review. C:
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