I love it
I love it
Just meh... It kinda sucked. Sorry. The plot had several flaws.
Why did Goku just show up all of a sudden? Why did the professors decide to split up? Why didn't you actually animate their training session? Sorry, but the fact that when action should've come during that training part, you just put text. And Goku just shows up, says, "You can meditate and use kaioken." Then he leaves without another word. It doesn't even explain how he lived? And speaking of which why didn't he get out with Corey after he gave him the senzu bean? Speaking of which, how did he know Corey was there? Or who he was? Or that he needed help? And why is Goku just thrown in there without any buildup, introduction, or anything? You should've put him as one of the three people in the flashback with Corey, Drew, and Zach. Then he would know all of the above mentioned questions, and then it would've made more sense to save him. You really need to work on your storytelling elements. Other than that, it was... well, meh. Work on, well, everything.
If memory serves, the Eds could have just forgone the training entirely and used the thingamajig itself. It probably would have spat out a "kill androids" button or something.
Honestly, the dialog is horrifically schmaltzy (except for Ed's, of course - it's like his lines from the show were made for this sort of thing), but the overall plot is fairly interesting, and of course, combining someone as un-badass as the Eds with DBZ is worth following. Overall, I like it.
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IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!
It was alright,