I believe you are getting better. I still didn't quite care for this. It was just a clay man slapping another one. I thought maybe it was a buildup to some punchline, but it never came. Then again, it wasn't labeled as "Comedy". I guess this works as a test.
Most people don't really care for tests on this website. The effects were actually pretty good. It was just too short. The sounds aren't bad either. You just need to have more of a story.