well....

I can tell you did alot of work on this, but I think you need to work more on your artistic ability. The hand and the perfume at the begining looked waayy to fake and it seemed like it was kinda out of proportion. The words in it could probably be in a different font because of the sixe of the text it was just to hard to read them. I mean dont get me wrong, this is a good submission, its always great to see up and coming talent, I just think that you need to work on the details a bit more and make it a little longer, anyway, keep posting and I will be looking forward to future submissions.

wow

that looked really good. It didnt fell to short it felt like an actual commercial
the style and music was great, i really liked it
Hope ur planning more flashes, one wit a story and stuff (lol wat would i kno about plot)
anyways good job
3/5
8/10

Smooth, detailed graphics

Very short, and I did not understand anything. It's very artistic, is it about a poem? I liked the well-drawn, smooth animation, the soft caligraphy and the soft, sand-like paper structure. Thumbs up for the great graphics!

great

the music is cool but its too short