I liked the story, and the music was okay too. I know how hard it is to make something decent in Ejay, I use it too:)
Not too bad.
I can tell you put alot of work into this, a few suggestions though.
That background music is kinda annoying, if your gonna have it I would lower it. If your going to use balloons for the dialog use the circle tool so it doesnt cut the corners of the text.
Thanks alot for your feedback
If this is a story for your kids...
... then you should probably correct the grammatical and spelling mistakes, such as all of the missing apostrophes, and spelling the word "answer" as "anwser," and "managed" as "manged." The animation itself is of poor quality, and has a very rushed feel to it, but that is to be expected on your first attempt. Keep practicing.
thanks for that i never even noticed lol also it was kind of rushed because i pissed about so the deadline for it got closer and closer.