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Team Kakashi goes to..PT1

April 16, 2009 –
February 18, 2022
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

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This is called Team Kakashi goes for Sasuke PT1 there is a part 2 im making it now. There are going to be 5 episodes ok. ps can anyone tell me how to which the sound on different scenes because it won't stop playing unless i do something so this is for my next PT i don't have any sound on this one THANKS!
and vote 5!

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eh...

needs sound. try making text readable on whatever background ur using

Alot of room for improvement

I see you've grasped the basics of flash, e.g tweening and walk cycles. I suggest you stop using sprites and start trying to hand draw your models. Oh and try and use sound, even if you don't have a mic you can still get sound effects from websites using Google, soundtracks can be found in the Audio Portal but you need to credit the person whose track your using.

Bleeeeehhh.

This flash is chock full of flaws, including:

1. No sound at all (suitable bg music OR sound efx) till the very end.

2. TINY, squint-worthy sprites you could barely see.

3. Text you couldn't read at times because of the background color they're on.

4. The slow pacing of the action (pauses for dialogue made tedious by 1,2, & 3 above).

5. Sprite fight(s) in low end of the choreography spectrum. ("HyuugaNeji VS RockLee" by DuDul is a PRIME example of how it's done).

Nice try though, and with improvements in the above problem areas and HN vs RL as a guide, future installments could be better.

I don't really like naruto

But it's an OKAY flash, you should do some voice acting for some of the characters so people don't have to strain their eyes to see the text.

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