Meh...

This one was SHORT, but it had a plot.

ok now this is weird

ok a 2nd and 3rd one in one day ok thats a little over board so heres what you could do you could quieten down the music so that it doesnt over shadow the sound effects and this was too short too and congratualtions you ahd a plot this time good going soo 2/10 cause i was feeling generous

not that bad.

its too similar to madness,but its pretty good.8 for the effort.