I'm impressed...
I think this is really well done for a first piece.
The animation and artwork could use a bit more work here and there, but that will of course come with practice:)
I really felt the melancholic atmosphere you were going for and you captured the feeling of long bus trips very well too.
The music you chose for this was beautiful and fitted the piece just right.
I'm sure I've heard of Thomas Koppel before but I can't quite place him right now.
I'd really like to look into some of his work though.
Overall great job and I'm really looking forward to your next piece:)