Now this kind of stuff you dont expect everyday, And so it was a big suprise when I found this one, because you showed a lot of things like, promise, and you showed that hard works pays off and goes a long way. This was different for sure has a random feel to it, the art and animation was different but it was pretty good, the "VOICE" work was great I do think this could use some "SUBTITLES" though, but anyways nice work here. So this movie or flash as some call it, Fill it with fun and entertainment for the best of outcomes and bring it all together for something good.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So improvments are not the easiest to come by but to have a better product we should atleast try and put the effort forward, So I may have a few ideas here So I was thinking as a suggestion of improvment you could add some subtitles, while itmay not exactly need it or it may but the thing is its a nice feature maybe it can even be something that users can toggle on and off.