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The Red Smiley

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A couple of thugs from The Cyans (a gang) have broken to Red Smiley's house (who is the leader of the Red Steam gang) and are trying to get him.. here he is trying to espace.
A squel will soon come.

NOTICE: this Flash was made almost three years ago and I made a long break from animations so don't go to rough on me with the comments :D.

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Its bad...

yet its so close yo being good its hard to say whats wrong with it, I would have to say the reasons reason is its a little choppy when he catches weapons/ dodges bullets, the bullet time attempt was timed wrong, and the part where he tries to run for no reason reminded me of the type of dramma on a crappy soap opera. you could improve by:
1- use bullet time just before the action starts, and just after it ends, i.e. dont start it when he catches the knife, end it then.
2-make your main character fearless, but smart, so he doesnt run away, but just takes cover or something
3-fast move ment does not mean jumping across the screen, if it is an extremely fast movement use bullet tome...corectly
4-develop a burning hate for soap operas

Vladislavus responds:

thanks for the comment (it's good - that's how I learn stuff). in the squel I ll' try to improve many things that were fucked up here.

The Song?

Is by Mudvayne. (I believe.)

If so, which one?

If it's not, than nvm and ON TO THE REVIEW.

Pretty good, you should defiantly do Madness flashes, the same style of Madness is shown here, A small few parts were choppy, Usually when you tried to switch scenes. Learn to work on that and you COULD be the next Krinkles. (well....maybe not, BUT HEY, still a good madness animator.)

Vladislavus responds:

Hey thanks a lot man, but I don't know, I realy want to start my own original series, I don't like to totally use ideas of other people (like taking graphics made by other authors. However my friend did help me in this here). So anyways, next time I ll' try to make it "less-madness" hehe, with more prespective views and conversations.
BTW: the song is by Mudvayne and it's called "Pushing Through" if I am not wrong.
Not my choice and not my friend's but I just needed a heavy song for this hehe.
Thanks for the review.

Nice Job.

I liked it. Great animation, great graphics, just a little short. Keep up the good work.

Vladislavus responds:

thanks a lot dude! :D

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i like the music

Not bad

I only have one problem with it. It's way too short. Make the sequel much longer.

Vladislavus responds:

hehe I did make it longer - 3 min, check it out if you wanna
:P thanks for the review

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Uploaded
Apr 10, 2009
5:01 PM EDT