Well..

Not bad honestly. Needs sound.. Also needs the frame rate increased and needs something of a background. Other then that it was good and it's a good start to something if you want to continue with it.

Overall 4/10 and a vote of 2 good work and keep it up

Cool

Wondering how you did this, why was it so slow?

A great try,but not to the "NG user" liking :-/

Your frame rate is too low,your screen size is too small.
Thats about all the problems to turn a good flash into a blam magnet.

this might have been said before

the animation was slow....i'm not sure if that was intentional but it seemed a little drawn out for a fishing scene like that....

there wasn't any backdrop, not even props....you need to use more of the screen, and put the action in the center.

finally there was no music or sfx....again i'm not sure if that was intentional...but silent animations almost always have music in the background

3&2

Artsy

I like the crayola look but there was a lot of unused space in this. Maybe adding in some soft ambience for audio, like fishing noises or whatnot wouldn't be a bad idea. If silent is what you're going for that's fine, I just feel that a lot of potential was missing. 4/10 for the style.