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A test run to learn the basics of flash

Oh and this is a reallllly old account

And it does eventually end

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Crap I messed up the preloader, that's sad

Ok, really, what heck is wrong with the preloader? I just copied+pasted really. :(


For your first animation....ok

For your first animation this pretty good.
A good old stick figure battle to the theme of Mortal Combat....un-fail able!
The animation was alright the art needs improvement (but passed) and the music was great :3
I really like it how you made the animation go along to the beat and sound of the music.
Next time make it a bit longer and add some detail into the BG and your well on your way to success! :D


You dont test flash by submitting it. You test flash by playing it in what ever software you use. If you use macromedia flash 8 and you want to test, push enter. The whole point of the flash portal is for people to compare their COMPLETED works and see where they rank up against other users. NO STARS. 0/5. Come back when it's done.

darkwolf-thattoo responds:

You can't test the preloader in flash itself...
also its crtl+enter

Maybe it was completed? I might start something with a story instead.

I wanted to see how it would work online, and frankly I don't see any other way to test it online

Not bad for a test.

A good test. The animation is pretty fluent, but for it to be a good animation, you need a longer combat or a plot. It was overall good, though, except the characters propotion problems sometimes.

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darkwolf-thattoo responds:

Yes, the point of it was to learn how to make an animation, so I wasn't going for length or story
I will keep that in mind for when I make more serious movies
and lol the proportions did get screwed up a lot, I have to watch that

Was cool

Def need to fix the preloader and add a ending scene, the graphics were coo and animation was good, would like to see the full version.
keep it up

darkwolf-thattoo responds:

Thanks! And I and think I have fixed it, but I have to submit again to be sure

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1.64 / 5.00

Mar 30, 2009
9:58 PM EDT