Waste of time
-Voicing was a bit crap
-Animation was slow and dull.not much movement(crap arm movement)
-Intro was slow,dull and quiet
-There is no REPLAY at the end
-animation is boring
-not much in the background
Advice: is all above
Author Comments
This is the comerical for a series I am creating called Cana's Crazy TV. Cana is a sonic like character of mine.
Voice of Cana ~ Done by me
I know there's some problems with it, but I tried my best. This is the first time I did lip syncing or putting a audio file to a flash.
This series is planning to be a big one. With Sonic like characters like doctor eggman and sonic and others as well as other people's fan characters will be in this end the end. The series will become a lot better, I promise.
Right now Cana is the host and later you might see a few surpises as time goes on. ~not sure what else to say for now~
Any glitches/bugs/ideas. Please tell me!!!
Cana's Crazy TV eh...
...well I wish you the best of luck!
Here's how I see this commercial:
-You have the load-and-play, that's good. Most people don't have it.
-The title animation for the beginning could've been better, like:
-When the V fell off, it felt a bit slow and glitchy.
-When the title was being covered by the white, it needed to move faster.
-Personally, I think the voicing needed to be a bit better.
-Cana's animation needed a bit more variation if you ask me. Also, her animation speed was slow.
Overall, I just think this commercial needed to show a bit of what's coming up real soon to the audience rather than just saying "we're doing so and so". All I can guess is that it's going to be crazy (hence, Cana's Crazy TV). Good luck!
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