Had to write something. Great job
I love intertwining stories and this one was well done. I saw the Jerry flash already and it was nice to see the story of the person who always seemed to break Jerry's heart. I was dumbfounded when I saw what Jackie did at the end (why didn't I expect it? lol) and although it I do not generally like those things, It suited the ending.
Don't stop doing what you're doing, your stuff are a blast to watch.
Amazing... LoL indeed.
Epic genius... and wasn't the bum that Jackie beat up Jerry's dad from Jerry and the Closet? Yes, this tied things together flawlessly. You never cease to entertain and impress me. Thank you for giving me another piece of the story. I kind of hope to see one of these about Jerry's kid and/or Jerry's dad. Good stuff. Brilliant!
that was awesome
But come on, only the guy gets screwed over. I guess this is a great depiction where life isn't fair
I liked how you connected this film with your previous one "Jerry".
Though not as artistic, it was more entertaining than Jerry due to the amount of comedy elements.
I would've let out any sort of dialogue however, as it was absolutely not neccessary. The look on the characters faces were enough. The few lines that were spoken seemed misplaced and therefore somewhat interfering.
Nevertheless this is 10/10 material. Well done once again. :)
TOUCH CRITIC REVIEW # 19
"JACKIE" the movie that made me laugh and get shock. Tbis animation was a awesome film and I will remember this one forever. If you ask me, your animating is so great you should be working for cartoon studios. Trust me, this flash is a must see, no matter what age you are. You need to see this flash!