God damn it sunshine...
What the hell is Brucellosis!?
Author Comments
Submitted for the Bi-Weekly contest.
Starring:
-ExplosiveLock
-WineLock
This is NOT spam, this is a real animation. Locks aren't evil people.
You may want to turn up the volume a bit.
Enjoy!
uglyslug responds:
oh you'll find out
You commented on someone alse not mine
Well, well, look who it is...
~Plot~
Unstable. No humor, simple, not the most interesting story in world. At least in was slightly easy to follow.
~Animation~
Was the frame rate at 12? Please adapt to ~18-30, for smoothness. I personal use 24fps. Mostly, the animation was terrible. Background was boring and unfitting. You need a load more practice with Flash before you submit anything else. Very shotty.
~Sound~
Many new animators don't realizes how important using sound is. It really adds feeling and mood to a Flash. Instead of using cheap text bubbles, use voices. It keeps the viewer focused.
uglyslug responds:
That's incredibly immature.
Brucella Melitensis?
That was fucking great! Comedy gold, make more of these shorts, good stuff.
uglyslug responds:
Haha,
Brucella melitensis is one of the species of bacteria that cause brucellosis.
Are you a doctor, lazyDoctor?
lol good job.
Hilarious. And good choice of disease as well. :D
uglyslug responds:
I'm an expert in dying.
You'll find out...
lol, GREAT first flash sunshine. can't wait to see more.
Credits & Info
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2.64 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 15, 2009
- 1:04 PM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody