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Shambhala Attack

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This is my first submission and took me probably a lot longer than it should have, but It works and, as far as I can tell, is bug free. It's set in a universe that I created for a class that I'd been toying around with for a while. I wanted to publish the game without any copyrighted music or anything, so I hooked up my keyboard to my computer and made the music myself. The sound effects came courtesy of my keyboard and Audacity. I really am quite excited about the game and the universe, expect at least two more submissions by summer. Although I hope to keep churning them out. Please leave rating and comments it is GREATLY appreciated. Just message any questions to me on here, thanks!

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Challenging

I'm curious about the world you created and its pretty cool that you have the ability to make the music for the game. To be honest I found the game pretty challenging. I don't know if it's hard or I just blow to be honest. Look forward to your future projects.

Click extravaganza.

I like how you made your own sound effects. Other than that, I found the flying objects to be predictable with time. Like someone else said, it's a "click fest", there's nothing here to keep you hooked. Not bad for a first submission, though.

Nice Job

5 Starting Score
+1 Making Your Own Music
+1 Making A Fairly Decent Game
-1 No real animations
-1 No replay value/Gets old fast
Total = 5

==Critique==
Get some real animations. You just had a picture which had it's direction, size, and location moved. And it went splat when it hit the stick. Also, work on getting the story to match the game. You said you found the Albatross, yet it never shows you, only the albatross. Also, there are no necromancers. Rather than churning out decent games, you should try and put out an awesome game by fall. It'll be way more worth it.
Hope to see more (around fall) :D

~Howdiddlydoo

kerwyn3 responds:

It was made for a project for class, so, unfortunately I didn't have the plethora of time required to make an amazing game, but for my first game I was quite proud of it. Thanks for the feedback!

Well

I dident like it i know its your first thing and all but its pretty much a click fest and i just diden't like it nice try though

nice

good challenge here, the gameplay gets a bit repetitive though after a while, the graphics are nice and the controls are simple enough, but you should add music to the game. On that note, the music you did have, the song on the menu was really well done, so good work on that. A fun game for those wanting to test their timing and aim.

PS how long have you been playing keyboard? it sounds very professional.

kerwyn3 responds:

I've been playing for a while, but I'm not on a pro. level. Thanks very much though!

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Feb 25, 2009
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