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Lightning!!!

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Uploaded
Feb 16, 2009 | 12:30 PM EST

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so, I was in my writing class last semester and my teacher reads us this essay, which as far as I know is real, to boost our confidence in writing. This was originally written by a Jeremy Lavine, then animated by me, and it is word for word what he wrote. here is a link to the site where his paper is posted...

http://www.angelfire.com/
theforce/blix797/Essay/es say2.html

the animation isnt great, I know that, but I think its pretty funny. well enjoy

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JakBaronKingJakBaronKing

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Very random and follows off track of being educate

But it was fun all the same.

Though I strongly feel your narration could use improvement.

Don't forget to emphasize your voice when times become excitable or violent.

Your voices is rather monotone. That's the only real down side.



De-LineDe-Line

Rated 5 / 5 stars

never know...

because they were killed by lightning
then their tree fell down
on the research.

Ps. i lol'd.



JamesKnoxJamesKnox

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Oh this is great

It's a clever concept as well.
If you mentioned something in the movie you kept reffering to it later on in the movie.
Which was hilarious.
So great work man!
-Dr.Pain



zlxq3000zlxq3000

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This was amazing.

Not the greatest animation in the world, but it's always fun to make fun of failure. Good work.



EastBishopEastBishop

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I measure lightning in how many people it kills!

That was awsome i almost shit myself laughing lol
COS storm lol!
Omg that was rich in comedic humor congrats man!
From now on you will be my zues lol :3