Interesting flash...
Though the plot seems like you have it all planned, it is a little confusing.
And the animation, well, you know already, but you're probably new at this (and better than me at it...FOR NOW.) so I'll cut ya some slack.
Also, I agree with yayman, cut the interactivity. If ya gonna have 'em say text, minus well use speech bubbles if you can. Otherwise, Voice add to the flash movie!
And also Add moar songs, maybe more Yayman songs, or maybe even some of mine...:P