here is my first flash
i liked to thank hunter (jhj232)
for the story board
i hope you enjoy!!!
plz rate and comment
pluz its on youtube too
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=a9YM-PHmLWg
Not bad...
I take it this was one of your first works (also because you only have 3 submited so far haha) i just think its a bit fast paced and not very understandable at some parts, also there is a big change in sound volumes xD
while they are speaking you can hear them so so but then the final music comes and its really loud xD
keep it up! ;)
lol........
next time ...make it a little(a lot) longer
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The animation was crappy, but I laughed... :D
:) cool
Wow, your first flash... I remember my days back on flash 6... so old... But overall it was okay. Work on your graphics! Get Photoshop 8-cs4 and play around. that always helped me.
8/10
4/5
-Jim {SVSA}
this ones my idea
i though of it and my friend was like thats a grate idea and he made it so i had to talk about it