I have not seen the first one, but this doesn't seem that good. It seems to just be a fly getting eaten with Mario coming up and being beheaded. It's too bad you just used a very simple sprite. I admit it's impressive to have a rating this high. You need to work a lot more on drawing. I myself know it's hard to submit things.

It just seems like this had little effort in it. It was nice for it to be so short, I suppose. It was also probably too short. I could not get a feeling for anything that was going on. Capitalization for everything could have worked too.

lololol

nice! make a 3rd one that depicts the fly in intense and graphic sexual situations. Very funny i lol'd!

TEH FLY IS BCAK LOLO?

What the hell is this. Its just terrible i made a drawings thing, and he sed its sposed to b funny?? What oes he no about funny? Really Really Awful

hA!

great job man u turnd my originality into a great work of murder

A passionate tale of an evil fly.

I loved every second of it, fly obviously foreshadows Mario's demise, but it is done so subtly and so beautifully that I can not help but cry. Mario's death was one of the saddest and deepest thing I've ever experienced and me to live my life in another way. The blood enhanced the story told by adding a sense of horror. I would have rated it higher, but... It sucked. :)