And here once again I find one of those interesting and yet still entertaining flash entries, a good submission you have here, I was delighted with all the happenings and so-on. Nice work here great characters nice voice overs, and nice story here with some good animation, really good stuff here. Im not sure I saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks. It was pretty good and I look forward to much more of your work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this some what better. Some "STATIC" on the voices just a little you may want to clear that up some how.