And here once again I find one of those interesting and yet still entertaining flash entries, a good submission you have here, I was delighted with all the happenings and so-on. Nice work here great characters nice voice overs, and nice story here with some good animation, really good stuff here. Im not sure I saw any real negitive points needing improvment, most of this was pretty good so nice effort there, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks. It was pretty good and I look forward to much more of your work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. Here are a few tips and ideas on making this some what better. Some "STATIC" on the voices just a little you may want to clear that up some how.
I like how every review that points out the second and third bits weren't as good gets marked "Useless." I have to agree, though. The first part was splendid. The second was nonsensical, but not in a "Ha ha just what the fuck" kind of way. The third broke the rules.
Up with the funny, down with the attempts at being non sequitur.
heads i win,tails you loose
that was hilarious.part 2 was hilarious.u should make more time trails
Will be done. Someday. The theme is "Propaganda" (; .
New time trial?
I was surprised to hear something about a time trial. This has got to be the first time in like three years I've seen one of these! All in all, it was a good collab, though I do wish it was longer.
Pt 1 ruled
but pt 3 didn't fit in the assignment because it clearly resembled two-face.
part 2 was just boring
but part 1 was very funny withe the bored impressions of those 2 in the end bit
sorry but pt 2 and 3 pulled my rating down
to 7/10 3/5