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This is my first flash i have a lot of ideas but i can't animate for shit (it sucks i know) thx 4 al the helping comments so im giving some news me and a friend is gonna coaporate to make a flash sence i got great storys and good art he got the great animation so im thinking of asking 4 help from him and who know mayby one day i can put my great ideas ( i never give my self credit :( ) so let's hope i can do this i got an idea that i got from the remixed portal song :) OK UPDATE im getting a better flash ware to my new computer so let's see if my animatoin can get better :)

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Nice first flash.

Good effort, unfitting music, but quite decent animation for a first time. You have potential.

Green-Pineapple responds:

thx =) im making another stick movie right now and i hope that my animation will get better overtime =) (my computer got a virus and that stick is gone but i just got my new flash whare so i hope that i can make a new one (a good one that is)

Pretty okay

It's good to see that your first flash is still better than anything I've ever made.

Change music

The movie is a little short, and you have to change the music, because it's too soft (but I like Zelda).
However, not too bad for the first flash.

Green-Pineapple responds:

yeah i know it does not really fit in its just i love that tune =D

Meh, it's okay

Not bad for a first Flash. If your animating sucks, you should have made it a little longer, to make up for it. Also, a background would help. Maybe sounds, if you want. Overall, it's okay.

Green-Pineapple responds:

yeah i know this one was more of a test not a real try i just wanted to see the responses the only thing i can inprove right now is my animation im having a real hard time animating =( and im trying to find sounds i hope to find some but my computer sucks and im gonna buy a new hard drive so i can take away some space

alrite

the flash wasnt bad but the music was bad for it

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Dec 20, 2008
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