it's alright
Good chose of music,
animation was smooth,
graphics could use one extra shade of color would make a big difference.
pretty good for a first submission.
Author Comments
this is my first animation to be put up on newgrounds. I'm going to put new ones up soon as son as i can think of ideas for that wall 2. it will probably be more fluid and longer but i hop you enjoy this short film...flash lolz.
Nice Work
For it being your first animation it was well done.
Smooth animation, and a song.
Very random stuff though, but isn't that what everyone does these days?
Yes
The New music really did make the difference. I like how free and imaginative this is, now if you do want to add more, find some varios sound effects for the stuff going on, if you feel like miving onto your next project, that's cool to, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
That wall is enticing...
It was alright, the only real problem was the song quality, which was lower than what it originally was. It fit right in, just the quality was lower than what it should've been, maybe you can work on that? Nothing other than that, and it had some pretty good animation
