This was cute
Now here was something cute, it was very "SHORT" though and while thats not a bad thing maybe you could ad other shorts along with it, maybe even adding some "COLOR" here and there would be a plus but overall this was notbad.
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So one way I can try and helpwith an idea would be to add more shorts to this one short toon kinda like a collab of shorts that way you bring more quality to it instead of just one short tune.
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