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why dogs hate fat people

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That's it!
Hope you get it.
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What?

This was really short and retarded!

i dont get it please explain

funny but wtf i dont get it

peT-the-dead responds:

Nah, I hate to explain jokes

pretty good

I thought it was kinda funny

just add a couple sounds and i would of been...more kinda ...funny

and ur preloaders a little messed

ARF

peT-the-dead responds:

What's wrong with the preloader? Didn't it autoplay or what is it?

Thanks for the constructive review

Not Terribly Funny

While the art can certainly be improved (no doubt about that), the storyline is kinda boring and too predictable. Hone both your artistic and storywriting skills and you'll be an amazing Flash animator.

peT-the-dead responds:

Yes the art could have been better. But I thouht the storyline was okay, considering that this is just a short.

Anyway Thanks for the helpful review!

what?

i didn't really get it :/
and it could need some sound

peT-the-dead responds:

Sorry if you didn't get it.
And sound? Maybe next time.
thx 4 reviewing

Credits & Info

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Votes
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Score
2.58 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 25, 2008
7:22 AM EST
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