better...easier to follow
very good job controlling the many refrences...though i still saw 5 at least when i watched...and i still havent found what this is based on, but "generic rpg: the animated series" sounds good to me as well (btw good idea on the title whomped)
9/10 grand selection of music...still wish there was a way to advance text though, and a replay and scene select would help too. try asking some of the more experienced flash animators as i have no skill in flash yet (dont own the software yet).
i think capt falcon belongs to nintendo...and shadow belongs to sega. not 100% sure but i hope this helps with future credits.
No I ment Black Shadow, Not the Hedgehog
Improved a bit
This is a bit of a step up on Episode one. I don't mind waiting to read the text but how about you spell and grammar check before you publish? Anyway namewise? I'd suggest calling it "Generic RPG: The Animated Series" or some such.
even though I should have commented a few days ago
I'll think about having that for a name.
i loved it!! keep it up!!
just needs some improvements
since you're already creating episode 3, maybe you could work on the improvements? i might message you :). Anyways, i loved it and i know you have potential. with some touching up, this could be a memorable newgrounds series!
one more thing i thought about. this series needs a title xD.
can't wait for part 3 .. but if u make changes.. i can manage :)