Way to random
for some reason the guy's pregnant. Wouldn't recommend it to anybody. Give it a few funnier scenes, and make the lips move more in tune with the dialogue.
Author Comments
The now two sassy teenagers mourn the death of their friends. However, Leyroy just can't stop killing.
too random ...
and sort of annoying ...also i think my ear drums exploded when u did the DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNN but that was kinda funny
criticisms
Lipsyns= was not properly done
Sounds= horrifying and
Animation = the best part of your work
Advice = work on lipsyning, your sound and made a better animation i like your work very experimental ( respond to me tell me what you think)