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Story of underling

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A bit shoddy but it tells the story of my character erm i hope this doesnt get deleted for being so rubbish. please be kind i know theres a tendancy to blam but hey feel free it got plenty of blamming last time i posted it somewhere. :) Ux

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cool

it was sorta cool, but was the baby supposed to be jesus?

UnderlingX responds:

lol no, its underling it just so happens that the crib is a bit like a manger cause its in the 1100s

I really liked it

Although I didn't really understand the end? good art work and nice bloody death scenes!!

UnderlingX responds:

The end was him escaping from the secure facility he was kept in... there was a discription with the film but i lost it when SupperBas went down.

Got talent bro - make more.

Not bad. Good anim even tho I HATE sticks.

Liked your sounds big time.

UnderlingX responds:

I need to get a tablet :P i did have one but it was rubbish.

meh

it not exactly bad. its, something to do while on newgrounds.

as a chronological timeline, it's pretty well done. but as a stick movie, it is lacking in violence. there should be a scene where the stick man goes on a rampage. or is that in the sequel?

in anycase, the drawing, animation and sounds are well done. and this vid does show promise. 4/5 and an 8/10

UnderlingX responds:

yea that was a main point i got from people was there wasnt enough action. Also i was told the movements were too forced, which i guess is true.

Great

While, yes there is some tidying up to do. I can see some great potential. nice job!

UnderlingX responds:

ha "some" tidying haha i need a complete overhaul. thx for the comment though

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Score
3.38 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 8, 2008
2:34 PM EDT