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Penguin Short #1

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Uploaded
Sep 29, 2008 | 4:25 PM EDT

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Hey, this is my first animation so it's just a short one about a little penguin who goes fishing! :)

I understand that, yes, maybe a fire would be a little hard to light with timber that you cant even get from the artic, but it's just a fun little animation that I tried to make to hopefully entertain you for the short time it runs! ^^

Special thanks to Vaifan90 for the music
and thank you for watching! :)
Enjoy!! ^^

(I also just want to mention that this was all done by mouse which made it quite difficult, but hopefully it hasn't affected it too much! :)

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vai90vai90

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Aww

Thank you for using my one of my tracks in this cute little flash. :3
I really liked it.^^

Keep up the good work!
~ Martin ~


AshleyAnimates responds:

No problem, I loved your song and was really glad I could use it! ^^


HatzHatz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

very cute

The story was cute and simple.
You conveyed the idea quite clearly but there wasn't a lot of attention to detail.
A bit of extra work on the shadows and lighting and character movement could make this a very cool little clip.
A lot of people draw with a mouse, though a tablet makes things more convenient, the same sort of detail can be communicated with a little more time and effort if using a mouse.
Great work


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AshleyAnimates responds:

Thank you, I will try harder with that extra detail next time! :)


KaramashiKaramashi

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

For your first animation its not that bad but its far from anything truly great. It was cute and all but lengthen it and give it some leverage with a story also.


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RulerofChaosRulerofChaos

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Hmm...

Well, it was very short...and a little random. I suggest you extend the flash, mostly. Maybe work on better animation. It wasn't TOO bad, but it was far from good.


AshleyAnimates responds:

Yep, next time i'll try work on something longer as I know it was incredibly short :) It was mainly just trying to get to grips with all the movement etc.
Thank you for the review ^^


EmasherEmasher

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good Effort!

For your first animation this was really good. Better than a lot of other first animations I've seen on here.

Keep up the good work.


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