Boring, and not really expiremental.
Without going into detail on the argument itself, it shouldn't even be worth mentioning that this is incredibly boring from the viewpoint of visuals and general entertainment.
That said, most of what you're saying here has been said already, and better at that. For the most part it seems more like you're going over things that are a given- that yes, there is more to right and wrong and in a lot of situations the moral line blurs, but all you're saying here seems to be "If you commit an act of right or wrong, then you must face the consequences set fit by your peers, especially provided if them or their morals guide them to a different conclusion."
The message is incredibly basic and it's handled in a completely uninteresting way. To be honest even the vocabulary feels incredibly dry; while it may be fitting and gets the message across with as much clarity as possible, it feels incredibly boring and mundane and it makes the info presented even more boring as a result.
I'd give a few stars for the music, but it isn't yours so I don't feel like handing you that allowance.
With all this said, this isn't 'expiremental', as far as I could call it. To be honest that line feels more like a cop-out considering I wouldn't even call this a flash so much as a slideshow of a few paragraphs. For one to call this expiremental it should atleast try and use new, different styles or work outside the boundaries of the norm, but this didn't do that- I see plenty of shitty flashes scroll through text like this, as if it were a powerpoint rather than an animation, but to be fair to them they generally have some semblance of graphics. As a matter of fact, this flash is the polar opposite of expiremental; it's so basic and mundane I would say that this is exactly the bottom of the barrell as far as flash making goes- a slideshow. That's all this was.
If you want to improve, I would suggest you try your hand at making graphics, even if they are just static- it would improve it atleast slightly.
That said, I don't find this to be enjoyable or interesting at all, and while there's some obvious thought to it it feels like you put in absolutely 0 effort and it shows. It's style over substance, pretentious and dull. Actually make a flash next time.
