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Wee! Okay if anybody is interested in the story then here it is.
We have a doctor(woman) in our school and once if my friend went there complaining of a headache she gave him.... COALPILLS. So after that time weve been laughin our asses off cuz we made up that when you go see her with some problem shes gona "inject" coalpills into your vein or shoot a large one from a cannon.
Hope you like it. Please leave comments. Thats the thing that keeps me going;).

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Huh.

I found it funny, am I meant too?
Lol anyway!
Jon

ZreaperZ responds:

Ha thanks man:D Ya it was supposed to be funny:P Stay in touch for Pill : two

IT was pretty cool

It seemed futuristic to me Pills having jobs to be swallowed so pretty cool also it wa s really small i dont really have the best eyesight so i struggled reading some of it.

ZreaperZ responds:

sry for the small size but thats where i was going. :P

Easy to swallow even without the sugar coating.

Smooth animation, simple style, appropriate use of blur effects and frame size, and movement in camera work all make Pill a joy to watch. A few more appropriate sound effects or even ambient noise (squeaking jobs sign maybe) would be nice to try.

I love a good short, but I think it might be fun to see more Pill in the future.

ZreaperZ responds:

Thanks man! Ill really consider making a sequal or maby many sequals:D

You asked for comments

I'm giving you a poop and a 2 because only recently have I started judging these. What caused it you ask? It's every random person putting 10 second flashes that have no purpose or point up on the site and there being half a column of purple everyday of which more than half will get blammed.

Because you used blurring, SFX, and didn't rupture my eardrums with surprise audio explosions I feel you should get SOME points, but nothing more than Poop and 2.

Keep trying, I'm sure we'll be giving you 10's and 5's on future work, barring more inside joke shorts that really aren't that funny.

Sean

Short, but good no doubt

I liked the blurry effect you used, but most than all, how simple it is. Funny for sure.

ZreaperZ responds:

Thanks man! Sequal is a go!

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Votes
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Score
3.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 11, 2008
12:04 PM EDT