awesome
it was awesome but no way gotenks ss1 could even damage veggeto super saiyan 1
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Sorry about the speed newgrounds made it slower for some reason. Well here it is my second animation. Tell me what u think and i will be comeing out with more animations.
dude
you are awesome i am adding you to favorites
permaximum1 responds:
oh cool thanx
WTF 6.9 mb
you didnt compress it did you
permaximum1 responds:
no dont think so
Hmmm...
Background movement needs working. When the beam wave clashing began you transitioned it to be from a distance.... well you tried anyway. Points for using Jump Superstar Sprites. And uh ya godda compress that Music. I know Megadeth is hardcore and all but yeah.
Oh and what a cheesy ending. :P
permaximum1 responds:
ya i will keep getting better
Needs improvement.
For a beginner flash, it was decent. Though there is room for improvement in a couple fields. First off, it'd be wise to add a preloader. NG offers them in their download section. It's basic, but it'll get the job done.
Besides the song playing in the background, there wasn't much in the sound department. Some punches, kicks, blasts, and charge noises would make this flash much more authentic. Also, you need to learn how to compress your sound. This flash easily could've been sized down to about 2MB. You'll wish you had that extra room when you start further developing your skills.
As for the actual animation, while a little jaggy at times, it was decent. The thing that annoyed me the most was the background moving out of place. But perhaps you intended to have that effect. After all, this is a DBZ flash.
All in all, while not spectacular, it was ok for your second animation. I would suggest brushing up on some online tutorials before submitting another, particularly on onion skinning. This will help your animations become much smoother.
permaximum1 responds:
ya i started to make this before i had anysounds and i will started on somw newone that will be better.