ehh I think you can do alot better music was really cool though
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when i heard the words 'make what make you laughf" i did so but odd enuf bushs make me lol.....and murder too!
but i love this and hope to turn this into a series.
...............Wow..
It's......... umm... boring...
Ugh...
When the credits are the best animated part, you know you need to work on it.
The lips moved worse than badly dubbed anime; and worse, you just copied it for all the characters!
The "human" was wearing a poncho, so you didn't have to do a walk cycle. (Why would someone be wearing a poncho there?)
Your attempts at squash and stretch did not work at all; they made it worse.
The strongest point was the story, which was better than 85% of the works submitted to the portal.
If you must make a series, please work on all prospects of the process.
Haha.
The bush is just like aw crap... fire...
murder makes me lol too.
I thought the characters were cute. Especially the bush that was like "why?" Good animation, funny story, I liked it. Hope to see more.
