Hey, now that I've gotten 1 good review and atleast 8x as many bad ones, it's Part 2! It's a little longer, but expect very little to watch. It's just another example of the animating technique I'm trying out - don't give it a 0 just because it's not funny or anything... :3
The Robotics is another good song, so I put it in this one. :D Sorry if you don't want it in my flashes stickmaster, but I heard good music and put it in :3
EDIT: Oh, and the music isn't supposed to stop at the end of the clip, mainly because I don't know how to make it do that. Lol.
Good stuff
This wuz pretty good for somone's second flash! I like it! but next time, smoothen out everything to make it look better. And next, just ask if you want to put my music in your flash k? Just PM. But i don't mind. I'm giveing you 10/10 and 5/5 because you remind me of myself 2 months ago. And becasue that I know the you put alot of effort into this!
It says on the rights for the music I can put it in as long as I give you credit, and I really liked your song, so I put it in and gave you credit. Next time if I go to put some of your music in, I'll PM you first though :)
nice
it was cool ;)
would be cool if, you zoom in..so it looks like you are driving on the road ;)
I know, right at the end I thought hey wait, what if I moved it so it looked like everything was getting closer, and went in the tunnel? But then I realised I wouldn't be able to do that because I drew everything on Layer 1, so it would have just zoomed EVERYTHING in. :/
Interesting...
Would like to see more animation, and longer too, but good none the less.
Also, the music choice was good, but plays longer than the clip, and if you restart it, it keeps playing in the background and overlaps with itself; might look into that...
Thanks, I'm already working on a longer one after the good reviews I'm getting on the second showcase. And yea, I really am not good with flash yet, this is only my 8th flash or so...I didn't even code the play button, just stole it from the official newgrounds preloader, so I have no idea how to make the music stop after the animation ends.
I'm lucky I even figured out how to get the preloader in my video lol.
Well...
It's a good drawing but you either post that stuff in the Ng Alphas section or the Art Forums. Try animatiing characters next time.
I was thinking about putting it in the NG Alphas, but it's not really a trailer - it's a full clip in itself, however, I was using it as a showcase for the idea. I get what you're saying though... unrelated, however, you gave a 4 just because you don't agree on where I posted it? >.< Harsh
very nice
for a flash showing your animating technique, hope to see it in a longer flash :)
A longer one will come, as long as I don't get a ban for having both these flashes get blammed or something lol.
