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Bob and the Apple

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This animation is for Albinoblacksheep.com's Tournament of Flash Animators (TOFA) contest.

ROUND ONE GUIDELINES:
"bob wanted an apple so he..."

HAVEFUN.

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Average

The animation was very cool, so the potential was there to do something really interesting, but...

The dialogue and story were both terrible, uncreative and childish. I was waiting for some kind of explanation into why he wanted an apple, but by the end we discovered nothing.

As someone who takes great pride in script writing, it disappoints me to see so many artists have superb animation, but let the work suffer from a complete lack of understanding when it comes to the dialogue. Think a little more when it comes to your dialogue, if you have an idea, tell me and I'll give you some direction on this aspect.

Keep up the good work.


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Votes
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Score
4.39 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 14, 2008
7:24 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
  • Daily 4th Place July 15, 2008