ha cool!

some pretty cool stuff, after i read the bear one i was like O_O but yeah lol hope to see some other stuff from you :)

Very nice to see something different.

I loved these poems, and I hope that this submission isn't going to be the first and last poem submission.

Very Nice

It's nice to see something other than hentai from someone that, as far as I know, doesn't submit much (or anything at all). The poems were pretty good. You definately know what your style is (as for the others, I would have to read more of there's to say for sure), and you know how to get a message across without bringing profanity into it. You also have a good understanding of how to present a poem (as showed by Time) to get the reader(s) to understand what you are trying to say.

Now, onto the constructive critism. Although the submission looked finished, it seemed to be lacking something. What exactly that missing piece is, I don't know. But, I would agree with others when they say to make the buttons easier to use. Also, some of the poems were hard to read because of the text being squished into the confines of the box. Perhaps you should think of making the longer ones multiple pages, that way people can read them without a microscope. The backgrounds were okay, but either too bright or too bland. It was good that you gave each peom it's a different background than the previous one, but the colors didn't always match the vibe.

So, all in all, I would say good job, and continue to improve both your poetry and you flash skills.

i see

It is very nice to see someone else do this t truly is. I have been messing around with Narrative submissions now since November and no they do not getthe highest scores.

As for the poems the are alright, but you still have room to grow.

Keep trying and learning :)

Wow, quite a nice change from the norm.

Well, I'm an inspiring poet myself, and I must say I'm glad to see something like this hit Newgrounds.
Your poetry was well done, very unique, almost story telling like style.

Best of luck with your poetry.