Slightly better than the first
I can see where the differences between the first attempt and the redux are, with some of the lines altered, a little tidying up of the animation in places (might just be me, but credit if it's due) and a major overhaul of the sound. You've done your fans a major favour here, setting the scene for a sequel or two, which I know are now available.
What I'd suggest is perhaps writing a few more deviations to the script in there, so that you could really tell it was a redux, as opposed to something that might be classed as a "touch up", in spite of the new audio.
Adding subtitles was a great touch and it looks set to progress with the series.
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