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Jun 10, 2008 | 10:43 PM EDT

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This is my first platformer game, also my very second game. Please give me constructive criticism, and not just reviews which mumble on about how crap they think my game is. Enjoy!



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


Yeah, the bug in the first level (reach the door and lose anyway) kind of kills the whole gaming experience. You might want to double-check your code before declaring a game ready to face the masses.

As for the graphics: maybe not the best, but at least you know what you're looking at. Might I suggest getting someone to help you with the graphics?

Once you fix that bug, this would be a decent first-attempt game. It mostly does what it's supposed to do (platforms work, etc.) Also, you may want to tweak the jump code a little. If I held the up arrow too long, the character would just bounce up and down. One jump per press, unless there's a double-jump mechanic coded in.

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Rated 0 / 5 stars

Really glitched.

Why is there a bug? This makes level 1 UNBEATABLE, and makes the game pointless.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


um did you even think this game threw before submitting it
>no walking animation character just moves left and right
>level 1 cant be completed i dunno about you but level 1 being impossible counts as being a serious bug
>Coolest part of the game was probably the font of the writing which is not a good sign
> you said we had as health bar but when you jump onto the platform you just die wether the human looks at you or not
the best tip i can give you to improve it is to make it again

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Rated 1 / 5 stars

Nice attempt

I think it's a nice attempt if you're new to flash, but please, test your game before submit. Seems like everyone has the level 1 "you died" bug, and that's just aweful.

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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


I can't pass the first level due to the first door not working, game over if touched.
You also need to fix the buttons to not be only where there is text. make the hit marker for the buttons to be a general square or something that encompasses the whole word. I think the main menu button after you die is broken because it leads you to the load level screen. Hope you get everything worked out and upgrade this game with more animations and features!