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Clever Girl

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Jun 10, 2008 | 1:44 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first creation using Macromedia Flash, so any constructive criticism, advice, etc would be highly welcomed. I have to admit, it all took a lot longer to make than anticipated and I'm not sure I fully understand all the features of flash yet.

I apologize for the poor audio, but it's the only one I could find edited at the exact scenes I wanted (not sure how to edit video or music yet). The audio is, of course, from Jurassic Park and is one my favorite scenes. These are quality last words.

Jurassic Park is copyrighted to Universal Studios and all Mario characters and backgrounds to Nintendo.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

So-so animation, but good idea

Honestly, speed it up. I felt like I was watching in slow-mo. But it was funny and the Jurassic Park reference made me lol. Overall, good flash!


Rated 3 / 5 stars


Poorly animated but I love the Jurassic Park dub. The punks on this site too young to have seen that movie are gonna hate this. It's a shame.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


but i wonder what yoshi did to mario behind those bushes o.O


Rated 0 / 5 stars


ok what did i just watch there was it Mario trying to asasinate yoshi or just a big piece of shit??!!


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

For your first creation, not bad.

This was okay, especially for a first animation, but there are still a few things you should learn. First of all, it was a bit too slow. When Mario was setting down the bullet bill shooter and loading it, for example. That should be at least twice as fast, in my opinion. Then again, considering you were using a sound clip that you didn't know how to edit, I suppose it had to be that long. But still, you could've had some more things happening before the attack rather than just making things take a long time.

You did a good job with the background, making it go slower than the rest, you did a fine job animating the sprites, and overall this was a good animation, especially for your first. Nothing extremely special, but you did a good job. I would improve the sound quality (only a bit, not so much that it takes an hour to load), but I'm assuming you don't know how to do that either. Well, I guess that's it. Keep trying. You've done good so far!