exciting
really exciting, nothing to improve really
Author Comments
This Is a movie abut aliens invading the earth, It starts in space where the alien invasion fleet arrived, that is engaged by the earth fleet, unfortunately a small group of alien ships gets past the earth fleet and lands on earth, there they meet a small squad of soldiers
Music credits:
Intro: U2 Beautiful day
Main: ( see audio credits section)
Credits: X3 reunion soundtrack (08101.mp3)
Please note this is only my second flash so go easy on me.
EDIT: Woot! 800 views
Good
It wasn't very good. Perhaps if you got a better microphone, put subtitles into it and didn't do all the voices by yourself, it would have been better. I thought the sound effects were hilarious. Another problem was the fact that you said it was the year 2050 and it looked 2005!
Cool
The main animation was nice but the intro should really be reworked. I particularly enjoyed the little human voices, even though some subtitles would have been appreciated as it was hard to understand the voices over the music...
Superbun responds:
Thanks for the sugestion, I will try to impove in the next episode of this series, Earth 2050:World War 3
meh.
yes im going easy on you, maybe you should add background for earth,its like a blank place with only the sky and grass. and when the aliens shot, screams but nothing, no city. so where did the screaming girl come from???
Superbun responds:
Thanks for the sugestion, I will try to impove in the next episode of this series, Earth 2050:World War 3, btw, the city was off-screen, and the place was, meant the be a grassland outside the city,i may do the city in the next one
Okay a few things
I couldn't understand the talking.
I didn't really understand what was going on with the soldiers.
The Characters were crudely drawn.
The movement was actually okay if not just a little fast.
I know you spent some time on this but work on your art. It is obvious you know how to work the Animation program that you used but you need to work a little harder on your story line and your art. Also Clean up the Audio cause I didn't understand anything.
C0ldSt33l
Superbun responds:
Thanks for the sugestions, I will try to impove in the next episode of this series, Earth 2050:World War 3
