My Story: SONIC XY THE SHADOW ZONE PT 1
Sonic:(Chillin' in space when suddenly....) CRASH!!!!!!!! A big portal was opening!!! There was a white hedgehog coming out the portal!
Silver:IBLIS!!!!!! (Shoots 2 rocks and a psycho beam)
Sonic: Hmph! (Runs to Silver and kicks rocks and beam away)
Sonic: NRRRRGAAAH!!!! (Turns super)
Silver: Take...THIS! (Turns light blue and about to shoot super Sonic)
Super Sonic: (Kicks Silver's hand)
Silver and Super Sonic: (Get knocked back)
Super Sonic: GRRRRAAAAGGHHHH!!!!!!!!! (Turns dark Sonic)
Silver: HHAAA!!! (Turns Super)
Dark Sonic and Super Silver: (Shoot energy beams from hands)
blam!!!!!! The psycho attack hits Sonic's attack!
Dark Sonic: HAAAA!!!!! (Attack gets stronger)
Super Silver: Grahhh...!!! (Gets knocked back)
Sonic: Finally I get some peace and qui...OH GOD!!!
a black portal opens!
To be continued...
good job but four stars sorry :(
Sweet a suggestion please add like hyper sonic and big plz
This looks Cool.