ack!

god it's scary, but if the story is true... how did they die there?
hmm... i want to see the whole vid. but still to scard to see the ghost face...
but yeah cool though. :D and hope your ok when you see the ghost

Pretty good!

Your English was perfectly functional, though it could use a bit of cleaning up.
Finding a way to work in voice-overs at a few points could be helpful too.

I seriously almost freaked out when the restroom ghost turned around. That was maybe the scariest thing I'll see all day.

Good job!

wow

it's interesting :D
and the rest room guy kinda made me jump a little, also try putting some voice in the characters it would be better than reading it, right? keep it up :3

weird

If this stuff actualy happened I would be really creeped out and scared for the rest of my life. Not really but still I wouldn't want to image the creepy things that happen around me.

Has potential

Hey,

For a moment disregarding the graphics.

I do like the flash: the plot (if you can call it one) has a lot of possibilities and is an interesting subject. You can do a lot with it.

I would recommend you polish your graphic-skills, and try to maybe turn this into a story? I think it would turn out pretty well. :)

Also, try to do more with audio. For stories like these it's actually very important for the atmosphere.

Good luck,

-Maurits