i think you did great!!!
i give you a 9 everyone says you left out the best part were he names all the stuff but its still Awesome!
Well done! Can't wait for a longer version. TBH, the only reason I didn't give this a perfect score is because of the length, but I understand time constraints caused by classes.
LOL WTF kind of funny
IM GOING TO THE FREKING HARDWARE STORE!!!!!!(pogo stick)
Tat waz $UPAH (00L! Keep up the good work! But y did you leave out the last part? too much work, huh? oh wellz! AWSOME
that was awesom but ill give u a 9 because u cut out the really good verse. it was still realy good :-)