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This was too random and uninteresting to be enjoyable. The sprites wern't that bad, but it was just too boring. Add somekind of a plot and some different backgrounds, too. Also increase the screen size so it's not so small.
Author Comments
My first animation ever :D. I know that I'm not good at it but it's atleast something :D. Leave a comment and say what can be better (but no comment that I suck or the movie suck since it's my first movie and only a prewiev)
EDIT: The movie name says Kirby Randon Prewiev but it's ment to be Random. And watch it as pop up please so you dont have to see what happen outside.
Decent
It was a decent job for your first animation. Next time try to make animation smoother and try making a story.
pretty good...
i liked it but it did need more... being a preview shortness is acceptable but if you made the window larger it would be better
kirby! <(^_^)>
2/10
it wasnt very interesting to watch, so you should try and make your next flash a little more entertaining.
dont do this
if you are doing this use the alphas in the NG mag
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