A Story on the Open Sea

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Please enjoy this sea tale.

2008-04-19 18:08:53

its... ok

well its not useless or bad but it could be a bit better.

NewtonClock responds:

Thanks

2008-04-19 17:50:20

OH EM GEE

Just like being in the open sea, amazing realism.

NewtonClock responds:

Thanks. It's my specialty.

2008-04-19 15:07:18

not to great...

try to make it longer and add a plot... or more action... or more humor.

NewtonClock responds:

Thanks for the advice.

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