Tales of the Temple of Phantasia...

Well... atleast you gave some attention to Tales of Phantasia :D
The sprites of TotW3 were a good choice. Sounds were good, however there was a background music problem after Cless/Cress defeated Dhaos. Jokes were corny... It's practice... But it had no load bar... and I had no chance to see the credits in peace, because the flash flashed further to the beginning... Story was basic and... It was practice. And it has some grammar flaws...
Atleast you made the 1st Tales of Phantasia Flash Movie :D!!!

hmmmm

quite good for the first time but nothing epic. The humor that i thought was there was kinda old and the fight scenes were to short but all the rest was good.

Sorry.

I know you've only been using flash for four days, and it is your first movie, so quality of animation aside (it IS a sprite movie, after all)... It still wasn't very good.

Just because you're not good at animating doesn't mean your flash can't be intelligent as well. The dialog, the "story," it was all very, i don't know... Basic. Forced.

Example: "Oh no, it's the phantom knight!" "I AM THE PHANTOM KNIGHT! YOU WON'T PASS!"
*fight*

Plus, the humor is also rather lame. Ex: "No shit, sherlock!" and "Where were you?" "My shoelace was open..." (that doesn't even make sense... open? The correct word is untied)

I think you can do better. Really be creative, intelligent, and just put a lot into flash that you submit to Newgrounds. If it's just something basic and random you made while you're learning flash, I would advise you to hone your skills first.

Good luck!

Very nice

The animation was very nice, the music was Ok but sometimes it was badly mixed. And if the thing about the shoelace was a joke, than it wasnt a good one cause i didn't laugh. Of course it can also be my sense of humour, I am sorry then.

Nice

A little short but kinda cool, some minor added humor to :)
Not really *my cup of tea* but it works! :)