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The first episode of a new series called The demon slaughterer guess what's it's about!
Well it's about a kid, or at least people think he is a kid, who wants to be a hero by saving the world from those horrible demons which never stops killing the humans.
I hope it will be about 100 demons but maybe it will only be like 10-20...
His name is Zack Dragonflame and he is also in love with a girl named Sarah who will get possessed by a demon and that will give Zack trouble...
Theese are the demon powers I thought of, A demon is made by sand and can be soft as quicksand and as hard as stone, A demon who summons un-dead and possesses the power of laser, A demon who has 4 arms, is very strong and has a bastard sword, A demon who can take creatures bodies, A demon who can read peoples minds and a demon who is a exact copy of Zack. What do you think?
ZayanuZaroc responds:
Why did you comment if you don't comment!
Interesting, definitely!
Thing is, this is only one of tons of Flash animations about small children killing demons. I think you could revise the plot a bit, and try making your voice sound different. Also, I noticed that the brush wasn't smoothing properly. To change that, click on brush and open the lower panel, then drag the "smoothing" toggle to 45, or 50, or whatever.
Dammit kid, you're makin' me feel guilty!
Forewarning: I started out with something just like this and let me warn you now to stop, please for your own sake! Not stop animating, but put this storyline down, it's cliche'd, overused and people will NOT just watch it just because it's there. I know, because it's a lot like my first flashes.
Also, you're coming out way too fast, I think you need a lot of practice. You sorta shot yourself in the foot, before you submit a flash, ask yourself if it's something that you'd actually watch yourself. There should NEVER be a white background. Just some advice, no hard feelings I hope, but I think you need a lot more practice. I dont want bad reviews to discourage you and make you want to stop. Crawl before you walk, you need to learn to draw in flash before you can animate. Good luck in the future.
ZayanuZaroc responds:
thanks for the tips and the next episode will be alot better!
Also wow I didn't know someone had made the nearly exactly same thing...
even your demons was quite the same.
I saw your Devil slayer series and that was very cool!
ps. Big mack
Yes a cool plot
i agree with the previous review
You do sound too young to do the voice acting, it makes the movie sound childish and makes people laugh at it. and yes it does have a very cool plot but i think you shouldnt give your plot away in the author comments becasue it detracts from the suspense. Also if you want a good movie from this idea you are going to have to get better at drawing.
On the good side of things it was deffinitly a nice set up to the movie and you used the music really well. I think after a few years practise we are going to see good things from you, well done for the effort :)
ZayanuZaroc responds:
Thank you and I like started animating a year ago also it's far to hard to draw by mouse...
I'll add shades and try find voice actors for the next episode!
Cool plot
Your plot is cool, but the graphics need work...
And try to get some adult to make your lines, you sound too young for this subject:$
-Q
ZayanuZaroc responds:
Thanks and for the next episode I'll try add shades and also I'll try get some voice actors!
