need amelioration

The moyea icon is really too big it need to be reduce by 50% at least
There's a lot and lot of text in that movie, maybe putting only video with little sub and when I say "little sub" I mean less text, don't use it always the public not so stupid use your video to make them understand.
There's no connection in that video, no story, they just show up and start a fight...

Seriously a good song must be put with a good movie, try making some AMV first and when you'll master them your movies song will be awesome!

Do ur own Flash please!

Hey there,
Here's what I think...

PROS :
- Ur ability to cut other ppl hard worked swf.

CONS :
- No originality cuz u dint make it urself...
- No ability in Flash animating...
- The Moyea Trial Icon there are too big, it too obvious..
- The movie should end after 1 song r finished, it look weird wif the song r done
-- but den another song a fading in...

PLEASE! LEARN URSELF ON HOW TO MAKE UR OWN FLASH & U MIGHT HAVE SOMETHING HERE...

Questionable

Every clip appears to be from a different .swf file. They each contain different styles of animation and motion, not to mention the fact that they do not coincide with the terrible story line they are suposedly illustrating. Looks like you simply did a horrific job of ripping them and clipping them together, then threw some random logo over it to make it look "original."
Also, you kind of just give yourself away in your author comments by saying, "you're proberly wondering if I stole this movie."
No, I'm not wondering. I know.

Could be better.

I'll admit, I was slightly suspicious of this flash, but after reading your post, I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt.
Other than that, this is and ok flash, the quality could definitely have been better, and there were a lot of typos.
Also, you really should give credit for the music, you could get into serious trouble for not crediting things like that. I'll let it slide for now, just try to keep that in mind next time. >.>

Either way, try to fix the quality, and you will have a pretty good flash

Pretty damn good.

Decent fight scenes, an actual storyline and fluid animation. Keep up the good work man - can't wait for ep 2.